Proof reading

As you can see their a number of problems with this piece of text. Punctuation is poor and capital letters and missing from the text. Basic literacy is a must in terms of presentations due to portraying yourself in a professional manor. The way in which the message is expressed is poor
 and could be presented in a much better way for the audience to read the message.

This is my paragraph after i proof read it. As you can see the punctuality problem is solved followed by capital letter are used in appropriate places to show that i have a level of literacy. I read through it to check for any misspellings. Also i increased the level of grammar by rewording some phrases to make the sentences flow more.  The expression of the content is much more professional now once i looked for errors through proof reading.