Friday 6 November 2015

Proof reading


As you can see their a number of problems with this piece of text. Punctuation is poor and capital letters and missing from the text. Basic literacy is a must in terms of presentations due to portraying yourself in a professional manor. The way in which the message is expressed is poor
 and could be presented in a much better way for the audience to read the message.









This is my paragraph after i proof read it. As you can see the punctuality problem is solved followed by capital letter are used in appropriate places to show that i have a level of literacy. I read through it to check for any misspellings. Also i increased the level of grammar by rewording some phrases to make the sentences flow more.  The expression of the content is much more professional now once i looked for errors through proof reading.












Monday 2 November 2015

Linguistic register

Linguistic register is the language that you use when writing about a topic. The main point is to make your writing seem like you have a high level of grammar and to make your writing seem professional. Linguistic register is key when expressing a short film proposal because you want people to be interested and take your film seriously but how can they do that if the way your writing in unprofessional. 



This short paragraph demonstrates poor linguistic register.


 I believe that people should be treated fairly and should treat people how they would like to be treated and Abuse towards women is really well known and is especially known for the bad things behind it. why would they feel the need to abuse men and it happens to men more than people think. men getting abused is weird and there's something about their pride that makes them not tell anyone about it.


This paragraph is inappropriate due to the sentence structure being poor. The word "and" is overused to join points together rather than using a variety of punctuation. Also the vocabulary is poor such as words like "weird" and "bad". It demonstrates a very low level of writing which in this case would be unprofessional. 


This paragraph demonstrates good linguistic register. 


In life I believe that people should be treated fairly and should treat people how they would like to be treated themselves. Abuse towards women is so well known and is especially known for the trauma behind it, so why would they feel the need to abuse men? It turns out that men are abused more than people think. When males receive abuse, there's something about their pride that causes them to keep the situation hidden. 

This paragraph demonstrates good linguistic register due to the sentence structure being good and the punctuation is used in the appropriate places. Also the the grammar of the paragraph is at a high level which leads to the paragraph expressing the message in the most professional way. For example, "abuse men?" is a good example of punctuation in right place. In addition examples of good grammar would be "keep the situation is hidden".


Sunday 1 November 2015

Reading techniques

Reading techniques are key to understanding what you are actually reading when looking at a text. the four main types of techniques are:

  • skimming
  • scanning
  • extensive 
  • intensive 
These techniques when trying to understand a text are vital due to them giving you the ability to grab a better picture of the text. skimming is used ideally for note taking, you will quickly skim over the text picking out relevant information out in your mind that you think is important. this could benefit a reader due to not filling his mind up with words that aren't necessarily relevant and also reading a large text often leads to boredom. 

Scanning is prefect for when you have a set topic for what you need to pick out from the text, skim over the text picking out key information which is only relevant to the set topic that you have chosen. this is extremely helpful due to grabbing the information that you need from a text quickly and not getting sidetracked with other topics. 

Extensive and intensive are mainly due to 'how' you read the text. having the right mind set is key when reading a text due to if your not really bothered about it then information will not soak in the mind. intensive is reading with high concentration followed by no distractions where as extensive is just having a general mind set of enjoying reading it, you tend to remember things you like so it adds on for a better study when reading through text. 
scanning is a great way to help the reader extract key information from the passage and gives a better understanding of the general idea of the text. 3 print texts insert below.